Is this story any good so far?

WOAH. ive learned from personal experience that long things dont get as many answers... but... it seems good enough, in the beginning... but, i rly rly hate those books, but alot of people love them. from the beginning, i read a few paragraphs and it looks like a book sorta like clique? i think books like, fictional(non realistic) maybe fantasy (alot of people enjoy it when the characters have powers)... i dont know, its okay-ly(sorry its not a real word) written. come on, is not spelled common wich means like frequent. stuff like that. idk